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Weather bleak
rising high
not much light
in the sky
counting days
till next week
How much more can one speak?
Children play;
all day long
Till the clouds sag low and the moon high
When dusk falls we play;
Happy unbirthday!
As they prance;
on the clouds
glitter falls
all night long
We twirl;
we prance;
Dancing on the clouds.
Celebrating day in and day out.
A merry unbirthday to you too!
Eating heartily till our bellies break;
lounging gleefully till suns break
Each night we celebrate;
A merry unbirthday to you
May every day be good
but
may ever night be merry;
for you
rising high
not much light
in the sky
counting days
till next week
How much more can one speak?
Children play;
all day long
Till the clouds sag low and the moon high
When dusk falls we play;
Happy unbirthday!
As they prance;
on the clouds
glitter falls
all night long
We twirl;
we prance;
Dancing on the clouds.
Celebrating day in and day out.
A merry unbirthday to you too!
Eating heartily till our bellies break;
lounging gleefully till suns break
Each night we celebrate;
A merry unbirthday to you
May every day be good
but
may ever night be merry;
for you
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I hope i didn't disappoint to badly. I got lost in the feel. I hope it was a very merry unbirthday for you
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Might I suggest that you use some sort of poetic prose, like couplets or even just a general flow throughout your poetry that makes it seem more like something to be internalized rather than read, when you submit your next poem to our group.